Thursday, March 24, 2011

Draft Four











6 comments:

  1. This is a good continuation of you project. Each one has a strong aspect, but i would be careful with where the cameras focus is on. The first and last one both are very sharp in the background and stand out nicely. The first one seems like it would go well with the flowers in your previous draft. Looks good so far!

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  2. Good idea, but I feel like your photos are really blurry and that takes away from the photo itself and what you are trying to show. Keep looking for photos like the one of the focused flower. Keep up the good work

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  3. I love how you can really tell the feel of the leaves, like if they have fur on them and where the veins are protruding. I think you did a good job of taking close ups, especially of the second photo. Hiding the full outline of leaf adds mystery. The blurry photos you did were really interesting because you captured something beyond the surface. What you think would be in focus is not, instead it is the little details that one might normally overlook that is focused. Like the branch of the leaf instead of the leaf.

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  4. Whoaaa, this series is really great. I love how clear the textures are. My favorite is the picture of the leaf, you can see the veins and the contrast with the tanbark.

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  5. I like how you have the camera focused on far away objects and the close up is slightly blurry. I also like the detail that comes out of extremely close up photos.

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  6. I think these pictures keep getting better each week. The textures are all really great. I like all the colors you use and how its all nature focused. Great job

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